My bike poem

biknut

biknut

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Wiggle Waggle

I ride my bike to reduce my flabble
I ride it fast, and fear no gravel
then in the distance I hear a babble
but I can't tell what is this Jabble
I must get closer, they might be rabble
I crossed a creek without a paddle
I cannot see well from my saddle
but I know it's a bike, from the wiggle waggle.
 
Well done. At one time, I considered making my all posts in the form of a Haiku. Nostradamus wrote in verse and he is on TV all the time these days.
 
I must say that I do like your poem
and I came here to say great post
for most good poets are never known
voices are hard to hear amongst the roar
that pulls tread along rocky shores
and if you want to reduce your flabble
then you shouldn't put a motor under your saddle
this might be rude, please forgive me dude
feet are enough to kick up gravel
but not to send it flying
this speed is enough to tear up
but I swear I'm not crying
every day more people are dying
while life keeps its pace
moving day by day
so I'll saddle the seat and speed off
with a little two-stroke
pounding the road underneath my feet.
 
Patchy said:
I must say that I do like your poem
and I came here to say great post
for most good poets are never known
voices are hard to hear amongst the roar
that pulls tread along rocky shores
and if you want to reduce your flabble
then you shouldn't put a motor under your saddle
this might be rude, please forgive me dude
feet are enough to kick up gravel
but not to send it flying
this speed is enough to tear up
but I swear I'm not crying
every day more people are dying
while life keeps its pace
moving day by day
so I'll saddle the seat and speed off
with a little two-stroke
pounding the road underneath my feet.
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Considering how badly my motor shakes
it makes it often hit the breaks
and then I have to pedal far
this things not reliable, like a car
and since it pedals like a truck
it makes me work as hard as XXXX.
 
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