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Old 03-24-2010, 11:31 AM
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Default Re: Addicted Motorbicycles Commercial!

I think its a great start!

i would cut the time down to something around the 0:45 mark. keep it short and to the point to keep the customer watching.

my .02:

-lose the burn outs, like said. i see you are taking care of that
-The multiple fly by shots got old after 2.
-the sparklie "Addicted motorbicycles" thing also was a little overdone.
-I would get some onboard footage of the ride, maybe a sweep over of the whole system and such.

hope this helps!

i look forward to the revised product!
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